Post by Philip Huang on Jun 16, 2012 6:05:21 GMT -5
Hello Boys!!!
Welcome to your Sixth Elimination Session. A very tough week for us this week but here we are. You need to submit a photo to be used for Hair Gel Advertisement this week and here are the photos
Darren: There is something about your face that i don't like. But your eyes pull me in... now the gel is good and i like how you compared both photos.
Philip: The concept is unique and interesting but I don't know what's wrong with me, I like the before side of you better. I think you look too uptight in the after one. But we can see that you use the hair gel in your after photo. Just not a fan of the style.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 4
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
Suave and handsome. AYUBOT finds your tagline and idea intriguing. Both looks are modern, but your "makeover" look is clean, polished and modern.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
More emphasis on modelling. Eyes appear dead.
Matt: From what we see of the gel, it's nice product placement. However, since this is an ad for hair gel, no part of your hair should be cut out of the photo. Other than that, I like this shot. I love your pouty expression and you look very sharp.
Darren: hm, there is something about this i dont like. It could be its not really focused. I'm not really seeing much hair gel but eh...
Philip: I really like this, Ashton. I think you manage to make me mesmerize with your hair. I think you did amazing job this week, Ashton.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
Yet again, ASHTON KUTCHER has impressed AYUBOT. The angle of the photograph accentuates your cheeks, brow and jaw, however, your neck and your shoulders are very tense. It also appears ASHTON KUTCHER had an accident in styling his hair.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Less tension in shoulders.
Mirror.
Matt: Very nice shot. The hair gel is prominently on display here and the model wearing the hair looks mighty sexy, too. There appears to be a bit of a smudge on your cheek, but that's my only real complaint here. This'll just come down to how much I like your photo in comparison to the others this round.
Darren: The hair gel part is perfect but i'm not a fan of your facial expression or the way your face is position. Yeah the hair gel is great but my eyes follow your eyes right off the screen and if i wasnt looking for hair gel i would have missed it.
Philip: Another solid photo from you. There might be a problem with your eye contact but it didn't really bother me much because your hair in this photo is a perfection
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
Hair product placement extremely relevent. Could it work as an advertisement? Probability 22.3820%. A poster in a hair salon? Probability 99.9452%. Blemishes and imperfections detected on forehead. Botox suggested. PREPARING TO ADMINISTER BOTOX INJECTION
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
ANGLE not best for your face - Makes forehead and nose look large.
Matt: I feel that your avatar would have possibly been a better shot than this one, but this one still works. Like Ayubot, I'm not a big fan of the angle of your face, but your hair is the focus and that works. My little brother is just giving you a hard time because he's jealous that you have better natural hair than he does. I'm sure you can take it out on him later in the bedroom
Darren: This photo is cute... and like i told Chris i'm not a fan of the not looking at the camera. But your face isn't as awkward.... I knew you explained why but every judge has their opinion I just wish maybe if you were looking at the camera this could have been my fav photo... its not bad though.
Philip: Like you hair. But I think Darren is right. If you watch at the camera and make an eye contact it would be better. Overall, it was an okay photo for me
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 4
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
Probability of print advertisement: 20.4928%. Probability of hair salon poster: 99.9934%. Angle of face does put emphasis on hair, but makes the face look smaller at cost. WRINKLES DETECTED. PREPARING BOTOX INJECTIONS.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
LOWER CAMERA 30 DEGREES
Matt: Oh, you sexy man. How dare you make me feel indifferent when I see you. This looks like a pose for an after shot at the Hair Loss Club for Men. Your hair is on display here, but it just gives off the wrong vibe. The styling would have been nice otherwise, but I wanted to see more of an ad for hair gel and less of an add for a hair regrowth treatment.
Darren: Now this is a great photo. I love the crazyness of your hair and i love the fact that you werent trying to get it to be perfectly combed down like everyone else. I love how you still showed Hair Gel and even looked at the camera at the same time.
Philip: Great hairstyle, but this one a little bit boring for me, Jared. I mean you were just standing there. But your hair is great and I think it's enough for you to make it to the next round
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
HAIR PRODUCT placement apparent. Skin and face flawless. Expression - blank. No signs of life detected.
AYUBOT notes that JARED LETO's shirt is slightly sheer.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Bring life to photographs. You are not a piece of ice.
Matt: I actually expected to see you use the photo that I used for your Memory Wall shot. I knew I would have to worry for you this week cause you love hair gel and it shows. This is another great shot of you and the product in really on display. Congrats on a great week.
Darren: I dont know if this would be hair gel or wet hair. This is the thing with long hair, it's hard to show hair gel. But i do love the model aspect of this. The eyes really catch my attention.
Philip: I saw a good model here but hair gel? I'm not really sure about that. But I really love the fact that you look like a top model here, Josh. A little bit torn for me this week
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 1
THEME CONNECTION: 3
MODELLING CONTENT: 4
EVALUATION:
QUESTION: Did JOSH HOLLOWAY dunk his head in a vat of hair gel? The gel looks thick and greasy. Not a look desired for hair gel advertisements. Face is perfect however.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Learn how to use hair gel.
Matt: This definitely looks like a shot of you after you got out of the water at the beach. I don't know of anyone who would style their hair like that on purpose. You look like a beach bum. I do love your face in this shot, though.
Darren: I want to love this... im a huge fan of black and white and i love your facial expression but i'm not too sure about the hair gel part... i mean i'm sure it's there...
Philip: Ryan, I prefer this one in color actually. I think it would be better to show some personality in the photo. You need to attract the customer here to buy the hair gel. I'm not sure if this photo will convinced me to buy the product
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 4
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 4
EVALUATION:
Hair product placement apparent, but black and white takes away. Black and white makes lips look crusty. Angle of face shows off all facial features superbly.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
BEWARE OF BLACK AND WHITE.
Matt: I have to echo the other judges in saying that I would have liked to have seen this in color. The hair works fine in this, but the photo's a little boring. There's just not much too it.
Darren: This is very model like... you look almost very feminine... only thing i have a problem with is your hair is cut off.
Philip: I noticed that feminine side but except for that, I think you look amazing in this photo. The hair style is simple but worked out well for your face. The angle is good too. Good job
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 5
EVALUATION:
JUDGING ERROR: FEMININITY/ANDROGYNY STRONGLY DESIRED IN MALE MODELS. Hair product placement perfect. Facial angle perfect. Skin almost flawless.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
PERFECT ACROSS THE BOARD. MAXIMUM IMPROVEMENT ACHIEVED - at least this week.
Matt: You have enough hair showing here that the fact that a little is cut off isn't a big deal. For me, the pose is the weakest part of the photo, but even then, it's still a really good pose. Everything about this photo is great. And your skin does look flawless.
Welcome to your Sixth Elimination Session. A very tough week for us this week but here we are. You need to submit a photo to be used for Hair Gel Advertisement this week and here are the photos
Darren: There is something about your face that i don't like. But your eyes pull me in... now the gel is good and i like how you compared both photos.
Philip: The concept is unique and interesting but I don't know what's wrong with me, I like the before side of you better. I think you look too uptight in the after one. But we can see that you use the hair gel in your after photo. Just not a fan of the style.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 4
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
Suave and handsome. AYUBOT finds your tagline and idea intriguing. Both looks are modern, but your "makeover" look is clean, polished and modern.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
More emphasis on modelling. Eyes appear dead.
Matt: From what we see of the gel, it's nice product placement. However, since this is an ad for hair gel, no part of your hair should be cut out of the photo. Other than that, I like this shot. I love your pouty expression and you look very sharp.
Darren: hm, there is something about this i dont like. It could be its not really focused. I'm not really seeing much hair gel but eh...
Philip: I really like this, Ashton. I think you manage to make me mesmerize with your hair. I think you did amazing job this week, Ashton.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
Yet again, ASHTON KUTCHER has impressed AYUBOT. The angle of the photograph accentuates your cheeks, brow and jaw, however, your neck and your shoulders are very tense. It also appears ASHTON KUTCHER had an accident in styling his hair.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Less tension in shoulders.
Mirror.
Matt: Very nice shot. The hair gel is prominently on display here and the model wearing the hair looks mighty sexy, too. There appears to be a bit of a smudge on your cheek, but that's my only real complaint here. This'll just come down to how much I like your photo in comparison to the others this round.
Darren: The hair gel part is perfect but i'm not a fan of your facial expression or the way your face is position. Yeah the hair gel is great but my eyes follow your eyes right off the screen and if i wasnt looking for hair gel i would have missed it.
Philip: Another solid photo from you. There might be a problem with your eye contact but it didn't really bother me much because your hair in this photo is a perfection
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
Hair product placement extremely relevent. Could it work as an advertisement? Probability 22.3820%. A poster in a hair salon? Probability 99.9452%. Blemishes and imperfections detected on forehead. Botox suggested. PREPARING TO ADMINISTER BOTOX INJECTION
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
ANGLE not best for your face - Makes forehead and nose look large.
Matt: I feel that your avatar would have possibly been a better shot than this one, but this one still works. Like Ayubot, I'm not a big fan of the angle of your face, but your hair is the focus and that works. My little brother is just giving you a hard time because he's jealous that you have better natural hair than he does. I'm sure you can take it out on him later in the bedroom
Darren: This photo is cute... and like i told Chris i'm not a fan of the not looking at the camera. But your face isn't as awkward.... I knew you explained why but every judge has their opinion I just wish maybe if you were looking at the camera this could have been my fav photo... its not bad though.
Philip: Like you hair. But I think Darren is right. If you watch at the camera and make an eye contact it would be better. Overall, it was an okay photo for me
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 4
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
Probability of print advertisement: 20.4928%. Probability of hair salon poster: 99.9934%. Angle of face does put emphasis on hair, but makes the face look smaller at cost. WRINKLES DETECTED. PREPARING BOTOX INJECTIONS.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
LOWER CAMERA 30 DEGREES
Matt: Oh, you sexy man. How dare you make me feel indifferent when I see you. This looks like a pose for an after shot at the Hair Loss Club for Men. Your hair is on display here, but it just gives off the wrong vibe. The styling would have been nice otherwise, but I wanted to see more of an ad for hair gel and less of an add for a hair regrowth treatment.
Darren: Now this is a great photo. I love the crazyness of your hair and i love the fact that you werent trying to get it to be perfectly combed down like everyone else. I love how you still showed Hair Gel and even looked at the camera at the same time.
Philip: Great hairstyle, but this one a little bit boring for me, Jared. I mean you were just standing there. But your hair is great and I think it's enough for you to make it to the next round
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
HAIR PRODUCT placement apparent. Skin and face flawless. Expression - blank. No signs of life detected.
AYUBOT notes that JARED LETO's shirt is slightly sheer.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Bring life to photographs. You are not a piece of ice.
Matt: I actually expected to see you use the photo that I used for your Memory Wall shot. I knew I would have to worry for you this week cause you love hair gel and it shows. This is another great shot of you and the product in really on display. Congrats on a great week.
Darren: I dont know if this would be hair gel or wet hair. This is the thing with long hair, it's hard to show hair gel. But i do love the model aspect of this. The eyes really catch my attention.
Philip: I saw a good model here but hair gel? I'm not really sure about that. But I really love the fact that you look like a top model here, Josh. A little bit torn for me this week
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 1
THEME CONNECTION: 3
MODELLING CONTENT: 4
EVALUATION:
QUESTION: Did JOSH HOLLOWAY dunk his head in a vat of hair gel? The gel looks thick and greasy. Not a look desired for hair gel advertisements. Face is perfect however.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Learn how to use hair gel.
Matt: This definitely looks like a shot of you after you got out of the water at the beach. I don't know of anyone who would style their hair like that on purpose. You look like a beach bum. I do love your face in this shot, though.
Darren: I want to love this... im a huge fan of black and white and i love your facial expression but i'm not too sure about the hair gel part... i mean i'm sure it's there...
Philip: Ryan, I prefer this one in color actually. I think it would be better to show some personality in the photo. You need to attract the customer here to buy the hair gel. I'm not sure if this photo will convinced me to buy the product
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 4
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 4
EVALUATION:
Hair product placement apparent, but black and white takes away. Black and white makes lips look crusty. Angle of face shows off all facial features superbly.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
BEWARE OF BLACK AND WHITE.
Matt: I have to echo the other judges in saying that I would have liked to have seen this in color. The hair works fine in this, but the photo's a little boring. There's just not much too it.
Darren: This is very model like... you look almost very feminine... only thing i have a problem with is your hair is cut off.
Philip: I noticed that feminine side but except for that, I think you look amazing in this photo. The hair style is simple but worked out well for your face. The angle is good too. Good job
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTOGRAPH .
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
PRODUCT PLACEMENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 5
EVALUATION:
JUDGING ERROR: FEMININITY/ANDROGYNY STRONGLY DESIRED IN MALE MODELS. Hair product placement perfect. Facial angle perfect. Skin almost flawless.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
PERFECT ACROSS THE BOARD. MAXIMUM IMPROVEMENT ACHIEVED - at least this week.
Matt: You have enough hair showing here that the fact that a little is cut off isn't a big deal. For me, the pose is the weakest part of the photo, but even then, it's still a really good pose. Everything about this photo is great. And your skin does look flawless.
Sorry Josh but it was the end for you. I was rooting for you. I really think you have massive potential. Hopefully we will get to see you again on the next cycle. Thank you for being with us. You did such a great job.. *Hugs Josh..
And bye bye josh 
