Post by Philip Huang on Jun 4, 2012 6:37:22 GMT -5
Hello Boys.
This week I accidentally gave you boys 60 hours. So let's see your photo for this week. Good luck
Philip: Alex.. Sorry.. Sir Alex.. I think your photo last week were much better. I get the summer vibe from this photo but my main problem here is with you. You look totally different than last week and this week for me it's a little bit amateur-ish. I think you can work out more with your face. You looked lost here. And your body language is a little bit stiff. But your body is still hawt!!!
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 2
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 2
EVALUATION:
WARNING: Photograph appears Candid. Face is very squinty. Pose is very stiff. Shadows hindering face, rather than adding anything.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Fashion content - More fashion input required
Modelling content - Poses too stiff
Matt: You look like Edward Norton in this picture. You have the theme right, but I'm not a fan of you from the neck up this week. I understand the squinting eyes, but would have preferred if they were open. I'm not a fan of the hair on you, either. I do love the open shirt, especially for this week's theme and the setting works, too.
Philip: Much better than last week. I really like your style here. Very sleek and sexy. The setting is there. I can feel the summer. Love your face this week. So sexy!!! Good job
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 4
EVALUATION:
WARNING: Threat of no neck monster detected. RUNNING PROFILE CHECK ON SUBJECT ASHTON KUTCHER. CONCLUSION: Ashton Kutcher is not a turtle. Fashion input extremely high. Theme connection extremely high. Ayubot is pleased with photograph
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Modelling content - Neck extension required.
Matt: It's sort of a mixed bag this week. The setting is obviously right and your clothes have summer colors, but I'm not a fan of the jacket for this shoot. You do have a good level of modeling this round and I like the windblown look of your hair in this instance. This is a definite improvement over last round.
Philip: The lighting helped this photo a lot in term of adding the summer vibe into the photo. And your style this week is quite surprising. I think you wore something appropriate for summer. I wish we get to see the whole photo, from head to toe, cause I think this photo has so much potential than this.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 2
THEME CONNECTION: 2
MODELLING CONTENT: 1
EVALUATION:
ALERT: SUBJECT CHRIS COLFER FELL DOWN A HILL. Low fashion content. Zero modelling content. Ayubot sees no connection to the theme.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Fashion content - More fashion input required
Modelling content - More modelling content required
Theme connection - More theme connection required.
TIP: Be creative - Take a risk.
Matt: Christopher Paul Colfer... Yes, I called you by your full name; that's how you know you're in trouble. As Philip said, the lighting helps you this round and that shirt does look summery. However, the photo falls short from there on out. The modeling aspect of the photo is weak and the theme incorporation is there, but could definitely be stronger. I hope you survive this round because we saw promise with you the first round, but this may be a close call.
Philip: Actually it took me 10 seconds to load the photo. So I can't fall in love with you in 0.3 seconds. I can see the summer from the setting. Not a fan of your styling. Too much layer for the summer. Take off everything please!!!!.. I love your face here. Cute but overall, I think you can do way better..
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
SCANNING DATABANKS - JULY AVERAGE TEMPERATURE IN BRITISH CAPITAL CITIES.
London, England: 25C
Cardiff, Wales: 20C
Edinburgh, Scotland: 19C
Belfast, Northern Ireland: 19C
COMPARING DATA TO CAPITAL CITIES AROUND THE WORLD
Washington DC, United States of America: 31C
Tokyo, State of Japan: 29C
Canberra, Commonwealth of Australia: 28C
Brasilia, Federative Republic of Brazil: 27C
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 3
THEME CONNECTION: 4
MODELLING CONTENT: 2
EVALUATION: BRITISH SUMMER IS COLD. Outfit suitable for summer in Britain. Fashion content medium. Modelling content very low. AYUBOT REQUESTS INFORMATION: Did HENRY CAVILL fall down?
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Modelling content - Poses too lazy
TIP: Perhaps try a cane or walking frame to stand up.
Matt: I think you were off on that 0.3 seconds calculation cause I had fallen in love with you long before that. And as a picture, I love this photo. However, this round, I'm having the same problem with you that I had with Josh last round. The theme connection isn't as strong for me. Between you and Ayubot, you've explained that British summers aren't as hot (high 60s to high 70s... I think in fahrenheit), but I would have preferred it if I didn't need to explanation to make the jump to how this is a summer pic. I would have liked to have been able to look at that picture and know what it was for. As far as the modeling aspect of the photo, I love your face. Your pose is also fine by me cause we've had a lot of pictures where the guy just stands there. At least the looks like a more purposeful pose and it's a break from the slew of idle-standing pictures we've been seeing so far in the competition.
Philip: I love the concept. The setting is beautiful and the elephant helped to make this photo more interesting. My problem is with the angle of your face. Other than that, I think it's a good week for you
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 4
EVALUATION:
AYUBOT enjoys elephants. AYUBOT enjoys nippleslip. AYUBOT enjoys angle of the face and expression. AYUBOT likes that JARED LETO has puffed his chest.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
AYUBOT ENJOYS THIS PHOTOGRAPH
Matt: You're starting to turn me into a believer. When I saw you sign up for the competition, I immediately knew who you were, but had no idea how you'd do in the competition. I didn't think you'd be able to produce good, modeling-level photos, but you're proving me wrong. This is a fantastic photo. Definitely reads summer and I actually love that you incorporated an elephant into the photo. The styling is great and the pose is nice, too.
Philip: Hot!!! You looked so great in this photo. I love your face in this photo. Much better than last week. The styling is suitable for summer. Great photo from you
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 4
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
BASIC SINGLET SUITABLE FOR SUMMER. AYUBOT enjoys stern expression, but MODELLING poses poor, but effective for glamour.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
MODELLING CONTENT!
MattL Honestly, I preferred the other photo from your drafts, but this one works, too. You can actually feel the heat of summer through your photo and your outfit is perfect for this time of year. The pose is pretty basic, but I'd say the level of modeling is a bit higher than it was last round, so at least that's improving.
Philip: Very strong photo. You look so great in this photo. I love the setting and the concept for me is quite artistic and creative. Much much better than last week. You really step it out this week.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 1
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 5
EVALUATION:
ALERT: Ayubot sees no fashion. Summery beauty shot, strong pose and lighting.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Fashion content - AYUBOT CRAVES FASHION
Matt: For future reference, we prefer that your photos are no larger than 900x900. I see that Philip has resized your picture to make it easier to see and I realize that it was never explicitly stated in the rules of the game, so I won't let the huge size factor into my critiquing this round, but I did want to give you a heads up on the dimensions of your photo (between 400x400 and 900x900 is the preferred size of photos in this series). That said, this is a great photo to use this round. The setting obviously works and I love that scruff. Your eyes may be squinting a bit, but we're so close up to you, that it doesn't matter.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 0
THEME CONNECTION: 0
MODELLING CONTENT: 0
EVALUATION:
ERROR: SUBJECT JUSTIN TIMBERLAKE SUBMITTED LATE.
CAUTION: Photograph appears extremely candid. Conclusion - Actually a candid.
Zero fashion content. Cannot connect to theme. Zero modelling content.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Punctuality.
Everywhere else.
Matt: You're only 8 minutes late and this is your first offense, so it will not factor into my rankings this round (had you been really late or had this been a recurring theme with you, I would dock points). This photo does look very candid both in the pose and quality. The lack of a shirt does hint towards the theme, but I get the feeling that something's come up with you and you didn't have the chance to look for a better photo this round. This is going to be a close round for you, but at this point, I'm not sure if you'll actually be last on my rankings or not.
Philip: Justin!!! What happened? I already ranked my photo. I'm not sure about the quality of this photo. Too bad Justin!!!
Matt: I saw this photo shortly after you posted it and I immediately started looking through your portfolio to find a picture to post as an example of what I think would have worked better for you this round. However, after looking through everything, this is probably the best Summer photo you have for your model. The quality of it is definitely much better than the previous round and it fits the theme well. The modeling aspect of the photo is still lacking, though. You could possibly get by this round based off of theme, though. We'll just have to wait and see what the other models bring to the table.
Philip: Definitely better than last week. Your body looks great but I think you can do better with your face. Same with Alex, I think you look a little bit amateur-ish here. I can feel the summer. Overall, good job, Ryan
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 2
THEME CONNECTION: 4
MODELLING CONTENT: 2
EVALUATION:
CAUTION: Photograph appears to be candid. Improvement detected.
Setting perfect. More modelling input required.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Fashion content - More fashion input required
Modelling content - Something different than standing.
Philip: I love the angle in this photo. My eyes goes straight to you. The setting is beautiful. I get the summer vibe in this photo. Love the style. Very simple but suitable for summer. Overall, great job, Taylor
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 3
THEME CONNECTION: 4
MODELLING CONTENT: 2
EVALUATION:
Basic white shirt and blue jeans combination effective. Error - Face cannot be distinguished. Shadows are blocking face rather than enhancing
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
CAUTION: Lighting important.
Matt: Well, I like this shot better than last round's; you're definitely hitting the theme better. I do like that the shirt is a v-neck instead a basic crew. Since it's a white top, that small detail does help keep it from being overly boring. The setting works and the outfit works. I do wish I could see your eyes, but it's not that detrimental to the picture.
This week I accidentally gave you boys 60 hours. So let's see your photo for this week. Good luck
Philip: Alex.. Sorry.. Sir Alex.. I think your photo last week were much better. I get the summer vibe from this photo but my main problem here is with you. You look totally different than last week and this week for me it's a little bit amateur-ish. I think you can work out more with your face. You looked lost here. And your body language is a little bit stiff. But your body is still hawt!!!
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 2
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 2
EVALUATION:
WARNING: Photograph appears Candid. Face is very squinty. Pose is very stiff. Shadows hindering face, rather than adding anything.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Fashion content - More fashion input required
Modelling content - Poses too stiff
Matt: You look like Edward Norton in this picture. You have the theme right, but I'm not a fan of you from the neck up this week. I understand the squinting eyes, but would have preferred if they were open. I'm not a fan of the hair on you, either. I do love the open shirt, especially for this week's theme and the setting works, too.
Philip: Much better than last week. I really like your style here. Very sleek and sexy. The setting is there. I can feel the summer. Love your face this week. So sexy!!! Good job
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 4
EVALUATION:
WARNING: Threat of no neck monster detected. RUNNING PROFILE CHECK ON SUBJECT ASHTON KUTCHER. CONCLUSION: Ashton Kutcher is not a turtle. Fashion input extremely high. Theme connection extremely high. Ayubot is pleased with photograph
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Modelling content - Neck extension required.
Matt: It's sort of a mixed bag this week. The setting is obviously right and your clothes have summer colors, but I'm not a fan of the jacket for this shoot. You do have a good level of modeling this round and I like the windblown look of your hair in this instance. This is a definite improvement over last round.
Philip: The lighting helped this photo a lot in term of adding the summer vibe into the photo. And your style this week is quite surprising. I think you wore something appropriate for summer. I wish we get to see the whole photo, from head to toe, cause I think this photo has so much potential than this.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 2
THEME CONNECTION: 2
MODELLING CONTENT: 1
EVALUATION:
ALERT: SUBJECT CHRIS COLFER FELL DOWN A HILL. Low fashion content. Zero modelling content. Ayubot sees no connection to the theme.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Fashion content - More fashion input required
Modelling content - More modelling content required
Theme connection - More theme connection required.
TIP: Be creative - Take a risk.
Matt: Christopher Paul Colfer... Yes, I called you by your full name; that's how you know you're in trouble. As Philip said, the lighting helps you this round and that shirt does look summery. However, the photo falls short from there on out. The modeling aspect of the photo is weak and the theme incorporation is there, but could definitely be stronger. I hope you survive this round because we saw promise with you the first round, but this may be a close call.
Philip: Actually it took me 10 seconds to load the photo. So I can't fall in love with you in 0.3 seconds. I can see the summer from the setting. Not a fan of your styling. Too much layer for the summer. Take off everything please!!!!.. I love your face here. Cute but overall, I think you can do way better..
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
SCANNING DATABANKS - JULY AVERAGE TEMPERATURE IN BRITISH CAPITAL CITIES.
London, England: 25C
Cardiff, Wales: 20C
Edinburgh, Scotland: 19C
Belfast, Northern Ireland: 19C
COMPARING DATA TO CAPITAL CITIES AROUND THE WORLD
Washington DC, United States of America: 31C
Tokyo, State of Japan: 29C
Canberra, Commonwealth of Australia: 28C
Brasilia, Federative Republic of Brazil: 27C
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 3
THEME CONNECTION: 4
MODELLING CONTENT: 2
EVALUATION: BRITISH SUMMER IS COLD. Outfit suitable for summer in Britain. Fashion content medium. Modelling content very low. AYUBOT REQUESTS INFORMATION: Did HENRY CAVILL fall down?
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Modelling content - Poses too lazy
TIP: Perhaps try a cane or walking frame to stand up.
Matt: I think you were off on that 0.3 seconds calculation cause I had fallen in love with you long before that. And as a picture, I love this photo. However, this round, I'm having the same problem with you that I had with Josh last round. The theme connection isn't as strong for me. Between you and Ayubot, you've explained that British summers aren't as hot (high 60s to high 70s... I think in fahrenheit), but I would have preferred it if I didn't need to explanation to make the jump to how this is a summer pic. I would have liked to have been able to look at that picture and know what it was for. As far as the modeling aspect of the photo, I love your face. Your pose is also fine by me cause we've had a lot of pictures where the guy just stands there. At least the looks like a more purposeful pose and it's a break from the slew of idle-standing pictures we've been seeing so far in the competition.
Philip: I love the concept. The setting is beautiful and the elephant helped to make this photo more interesting. My problem is with the angle of your face. Other than that, I think it's a good week for you
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 5
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 4
EVALUATION:
AYUBOT enjoys elephants. AYUBOT enjoys nippleslip. AYUBOT enjoys angle of the face and expression. AYUBOT likes that JARED LETO has puffed his chest.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
AYUBOT ENJOYS THIS PHOTOGRAPH
Matt: You're starting to turn me into a believer. When I saw you sign up for the competition, I immediately knew who you were, but had no idea how you'd do in the competition. I didn't think you'd be able to produce good, modeling-level photos, but you're proving me wrong. This is a fantastic photo. Definitely reads summer and I actually love that you incorporated an elephant into the photo. The styling is great and the pose is nice, too.
Philip: Hot!!! You looked so great in this photo. I love your face in this photo. Much better than last week. The styling is suitable for summer. Great photo from you
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 4
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 3
EVALUATION:
BASIC SINGLET SUITABLE FOR SUMMER. AYUBOT enjoys stern expression, but MODELLING poses poor, but effective for glamour.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
MODELLING CONTENT!
MattL Honestly, I preferred the other photo from your drafts, but this one works, too. You can actually feel the heat of summer through your photo and your outfit is perfect for this time of year. The pose is pretty basic, but I'd say the level of modeling is a bit higher than it was last round, so at least that's improving.
Philip: Very strong photo. You look so great in this photo. I love the setting and the concept for me is quite artistic and creative. Much much better than last week. You really step it out this week.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 1
THEME CONNECTION: 5
MODELLING CONTENT: 5
EVALUATION:
ALERT: Ayubot sees no fashion. Summery beauty shot, strong pose and lighting.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Fashion content - AYUBOT CRAVES FASHION
Matt: For future reference, we prefer that your photos are no larger than 900x900. I see that Philip has resized your picture to make it easier to see and I realize that it was never explicitly stated in the rules of the game, so I won't let the huge size factor into my critiquing this round, but I did want to give you a heads up on the dimensions of your photo (between 400x400 and 900x900 is the preferred size of photos in this series). That said, this is a great photo to use this round. The setting obviously works and I love that scruff. Your eyes may be squinting a bit, but we're so close up to you, that it doesn't matter.
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 0
THEME CONNECTION: 0
MODELLING CONTENT: 0
EVALUATION:
ERROR: SUBJECT JUSTIN TIMBERLAKE SUBMITTED LATE.
CAUTION: Photograph appears extremely candid. Conclusion - Actually a candid.
Zero fashion content. Cannot connect to theme. Zero modelling content.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Punctuality.
Everywhere else.
Matt: You're only 8 minutes late and this is your first offense, so it will not factor into my rankings this round (had you been really late or had this been a recurring theme with you, I would dock points). This photo does look very candid both in the pose and quality. The lack of a shirt does hint towards the theme, but I get the feeling that something's come up with you and you didn't have the chance to look for a better photo this round. This is going to be a close round for you, but at this point, I'm not sure if you'll actually be last on my rankings or not.
Philip: Justin!!! What happened? I already ranked my photo. I'm not sure about the quality of this photo. Too bad Justin!!!
Matt: I saw this photo shortly after you posted it and I immediately started looking through your portfolio to find a picture to post as an example of what I think would have worked better for you this round. However, after looking through everything, this is probably the best Summer photo you have for your model. The quality of it is definitely much better than the previous round and it fits the theme well. The modeling aspect of the photo is still lacking, though. You could possibly get by this round based off of theme, though. We'll just have to wait and see what the other models bring to the table.
Philip: Definitely better than last week. Your body looks great but I think you can do better with your face. Same with Alex, I think you look a little bit amateur-ish here. I can feel the summer. Overall, good job, Ryan
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 2
THEME CONNECTION: 4
MODELLING CONTENT: 2
EVALUATION:
CAUTION: Photograph appears to be candid. Improvement detected.
Setting perfect. More modelling input required.
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
Fashion content - More fashion input required
Modelling content - Something different than standing.
Philip: I love the angle in this photo. My eyes goes straight to you. The setting is beautiful. I get the summer vibe in this photo. Love the style. Very simple but suitable for summer. Overall, great job, Taylor
Ayubot: ANALYSING PHOTO...
ANALYSIS COMPLETE.
ANALYSIS:
FASHION CONTENT: 3
THEME CONNECTION: 4
MODELLING CONTENT: 2
EVALUATION:
Basic white shirt and blue jeans combination effective. Error - Face cannot be distinguished. Shadows are blocking face rather than enhancing
AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT:
CAUTION: Lighting important.
Matt: Well, I like this shot better than last round's; you're definitely hitting the theme better. I do like that the shirt is a v-neck instead a basic crew. Since it's a white top, that small detail does help keep it from being overly boring. The setting works and the outfit works. I do wish I could see your eyes, but it's not that detrimental to the picture.
Arghh.. Justin.. I really want to see Justin Timberlake rock the competition this time. I'm not sure what happened but I believe you had your reason. Good luck.. I'll see you again!!! 
le sigh, time to work harder
